The Road

Paved, painted
Easy to tred
Sounds familiar
Umm...when?

Steep, narrow,
Rocky.
But guided by Light.
Two different journeys
Not the same destination
Where are you tredding,
My friend?

Comments

RebeccaYSPerez

It does not matter what this is pertaining to, because just like so many abstract artworks that answer can change from person to person. But it is the haunting reality that there is a difference in the "roads" we choose to travel, the roads we perceive to be traveling. This is a strong piece and leaves us, the readers, questioning ourselves. Thank you for sharing this piece.

Rebecca

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