Rock

Location

20603
United States
38° 37' 38.478" N, 76° 58' 53.7168" W

You were once my rock;
my solid foundation
but we shook and,
you erroded into single grains of sand,
gracefully slipping through the cracks of my fingers.
Sand like the seconds in an hour glass;
Our time is up.

J. M.

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I will lead my own future.

I'm not sure why I like this poem so much. I think it's because I can completely relate to these feelings. Thank you for posting it.

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