sad note 1

Sat, 03/31/2018 - 09:53 -- evasir

I've been so sad,
waiting for another day,
warning for not to day,
loving somehow more than yesterday,

And I became so cold,
need someone to hold,
all my parts, just like gold
you can see, but you can't hold.
 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

TamingOfSeaWolves

listen to Hurricane by Fleurie, i think you would like it. beautiful peom btw

evasir

Beautiful song! Thank you.

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