sad note 1

March 31, 2018

I've been so sad,
waiting for another day,
warning for not to day,
loving somehow more than yesterday,

And I became so cold,
need someone to hold,
all my parts, just like gold
you can see, but you can't hold.

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Comments (2)

evasirMar 31, 2018

<p>Beautiful song! Thank you.</p>

TamingOfSeaWolvesMar 31, 2018

<p>listen to Hurricane by Fleurie, i think you would like it. beautiful peom btw</p>