Sadness

bleeding norepinephrine,

on a promenade with sadness.

 

in search of an oasis,

but expecting an ocean.

 

no end in sight,

resulting in sheer madness.

 

uncertainty has arrived,

stopped all  motion.

 

filled with doubt,

losing all hope for an ocean.

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Me
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Comments

Annette M Velasquez

Innovative and interesting, this piece offers a unique perspective. I like the metaphors and imagery. But, perhaps you can expand on the meaning, use concrete narrative, it is a bit obscure.

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