Same Sun
The morning sun rises over the hill
With an orange glow, on a winter day.
She admires it through the windowsill
Saying whatever comes, be good and pray.
The man feels miles away from home and love
The cold wind blows snow across in small drifts
The blizzard is harsh, it pushes and shoves
He prays that this work will be quick and swift
Though miles separate they see the same
For one the blizzard covers up the sun
The other, a clear sun does she claim
The work is done, the red color now runs
A phone call to the woman, he is gone
A call about him, telling her go on.
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