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Scared, Yet Unbroken


Scared I'll be the burden that they name, Scared my laugh will call them to complain; Scared they'll put my heart aside as blame, Label me "unwanted" in their frame. Scared my life will slip to average size, Scared to dim beneath another's eyes; Scared to marry only to economize, Scared my worth will fold into disguise. Scared to mother in a life of small designs, Scared our days will tally like thin lines; Scared the future's gate with quiet signs Will close on dreams and file them under "fine." But listen, fear is not my final song, I am more fierce than what they think is wrong; I will shape my name, I will stand strong, I will claim a place where I belong. Not just a woman boxed to fit their plan, Not merely measured by a nameless man; I am a storm and I am also land: Owned by no one, steady where I stand. So, keep your judgments, I will keep my flame; Turn your "burden" shouting into my name. I will not vanish; I will not be tame, I will live loud, exact, and boldly claim.
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Fizza Bukhari

Fizza Bukhari is a pioneering multi-genre author and data scientist bridging the gap between psychological storytelling and global social impact. She challenges systemic barriers through her works: Whispers of Sin in the Shadows of Passion, The Hunger of My Own Shadow, Silent Scream, and The Magic in Every Day. Recognized by The IndieView USA for breakthrough narrative design, she creates bold, analytical stories that demand change.

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal anxieties about societal expectations; grounded in lived experience.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple dense ideas per stanza; fear catalog, then affirmation, reclaiming identity.

DarkSentimentBright

Begins negative but crescendos to empowerment and triumph; net positive.

StillEnergyExplosive

Explosive final stanzas with declarative power; storm/flame imagery; bold proclamations.

MicroLengthEpic

36 lines; falls in 31-60 range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Storm, land, flame, gate metaphors; personification of fear; strong symbolic language.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric first-person internal voice; introspective throughout with no dramatic shift.

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Comments (2)

Fizza Bukhari
@Katiecreates Thank you so much! It means a lot that this piece resonated with you. Stay bold!
Katiecreates
THIS IS AMAZING!!!

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