School

by Babyjesus2416

September 19, 2013

The education system is weak

The teachers just handout packets

and the information doesn't sink

like a disfunctional submarine

Something needs to crack it

because I've had enough of this

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Babyjesus2416Jul 30, 2014

<div>We all have our ups and downs</div><div>We all laughed like clowns</div><div>With our own breakdowns and comebacks around/ becoming stronger than we thought we would, stronger than we thought we could/ we just misunderstood/ our lifes as adolescence ascendin through life lessons, trails, tribulations with this world for the takin but a world </div><div>full of hatred/reciprocated back with more hatred/ it gots me agitated obligated and advocated to keep world peace in people minds activated/let's keep the peace assimilating what we waiting for? We can stop any war/from the ones we fight outside to the ones we fight indoors tell me if you want no more/ battles in our minds and the ones outside our doors/ tell me if you want more cuz my soul won't take no more </div>