Secret Admirer Note #13

Thu, 05/23/2013 - 20:19 -- bardgrl

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47° 37' 16.1508" N, 122° 2' 49.6644" W

I’m not the best at this poetry stuff.
It’s all rhymes and fluff.
But I hope this convinces you
That I’m worth a chew
Or even a date.
If you could only hear my heart rate,
When we talk,
Sometimes… I feel like I’m about to squawk
Please pardon my awkwardness
I just can’t help it; you’re a goddess.

--xoxo, Your Secret Admirer

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