See Through Their Eyes

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29229
United States
34° 9' 30.7728" N, 80° 53' 15.3096" W

Let me be a poem,
For one spare moment.
Let me be a poem and see what they see,
Hear what they hear,

As they are spoken
As people say the words that their written of,
With soft voices,
loud voices,
high pitched
low pitched,
male,
female.

Each one different, but they all look at him the same.

With judging eyes,
for poems go through the most, for every time they are seen or heard.
They are judged.

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

no one has the right to judge
be proud of who you are
through poetry, people can understand you
keep writing-great job
im a power poetry mentor

15masuncion

Thank you very much for that, and I plan to.

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