Severing Time

Falling forward, loosely clinging on
To a life that holds dear what cannot be
Time flutters by
Yet words never leave, forever entangled
Twisted within the earth for eternity

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

beautifully written poem 

amazing how powerful poems are even if its not long

great job

Allison_K

Thank you.

ZarieeLaShae

beautiful

2014shoang

i love this poem

CedarRose

I like this a lot. It's just... Perfect! Short poems are my favorite. "Brevity is the soul of wit." Keep writing, please! You do good work! :) <3 <3

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