Shape Poem by Aaron

April 6, 2016

At my birthday party

I wanted to have fun

So I put out an invitation

For all my friends to come

We went to laser skirmish

And played arcade games

Then we went back to my place

To continue with our day

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mrs earlApr 21, 2016

<p>A simple, clear event captured in a tight stanza. Perhaps some emotive language to capture the fun and excitement?</p>