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She is a Darkness Roamer


She is a darkness Roamer,

She is invisible without light,

but she likes it that way,

here they can't see her,

criticize her,

they can't put her to shame,

she can find peace,

she can breathe oxygen,

and not the acid that they exhale,

she is safe from the sharp things that people throw her way,

they cannot hurt her,

she is numb,

as she realizes this,

she smiles,

and climbs out of the darkness,

into the shiny places,

she is a darkness Roamer,

as she sees them coming and slinks into the blackness.

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poetrystateofmind

I am a seventeen year old girl, who has big dreams. I have come to understand that life is not perfect, but it will always be beautiful! Sometimes things seem like they won't change, but I have realized over time, that life is always in the works of getting better! Tears just show that bad things in life are washing away... <3

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poetrystateofmind
<p>Thanks for your encouraging comment!</p>
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
<p>well said</p><p>keep building off your ideas and express yourself even more</p><p>thanks 4 sharing</p>
poetrystateofmind
<p>Yes, she is an introvert... But they&nbsp;are all the people who criticize her (the exhaled acid), not people in general. You could also say that my poem describes the mindset of the introverted girl as she would describe the people who do harm to her.</p>
poetrystateofmind
<p>What&#39;s the name of your poem?</p>
StormAvis9417
<p>Is &quot;she&quot; an introvert? Who is them that she sees? It is like the people who exhale the acid are people in general.....Is it a mind set?</p>
eryn1110
<p>How come every time i try and view my poem i made it takes me here?</p>
Katie4299
<p>This is not to bad but it dont really ryme like poems should. Good job though. This dont really say anything about you though.</p>

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