She lays there

by BeautifulDreamer

January 19, 2019

She lays there hoping the day will grow bright

laying in the dark she’s almost afraid of the light that’s going to shine through the curtains soon

planning in her head how and why to get out of bed when there’s so much dread

She lays there building up the courage to leap to her feet

shower get dressed and put her face on pretty

this black and white thoughts are getting silly

she doesn’t lay there anymore instead she walks right out her door

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S.zaynab.kJan 20, 2019

<p>An awesome poem, begins creatively poignant but ends on a positive bright note wow. That's the spirit, and keep writing. Kudos.</p><p>I see comments are not common here, but interaction is good for the human touch in this cold world.  Pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too.</p>