She Said
“Blow out!”, as she held a tissue over my nose
“You need to scrub harder”, as she washed my hair
“Learn balance first”, as she held my bike steady
“Crazy night!”, as we three huddled into a twin-size bed
“Visualize it first”, as I jumped off the diving board
“You look beautiful”, as I put on my cap and gown
“You are doing exactly what you need to do. I know it”,
As I cried on her bed and she held me so achingly close
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