She shouldn't be raped.
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Primarily personal/concrete account of sexual assault; minimal abstraction.
Multiple distinct ideas across ~28 lines; moderate density of narrative progression.
Strongly negative; depicts sexual violence, trauma, shame, and victimhood.
Intense, aggressive language; exclamation marks and violent action verbs drive intensity.
Approximately 28 lines; falls within 16-30 line range.
Mostly declarative and direct; some personification ('noises of dread'); largely plain.
Shifts between lyric (victim's internal) and dramatic accusation (second-person 'you'); accusatory address dominates.
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