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she's beauiful


she was beauiful to me for as long as I can remember. I remember when I saw her. she was combing her hair. and I came behind her. and I said whats your name she came off rude and mean but finally she gave up and said its tyanna. my heart lil up like a candle she was beautiful I couldn't. but my finger on it  what I  love about her so much . was it the way she walk or the way she talk but I new she was going to be my forever 21  I wanted to ask her out so bad but all that came out was hi as I just stood there waiting for her to say something she was quiet as I was and finally it got AWKWARD  as she walked away my heart broke and all I  could think of is why I didnt say i liked her when i had the chance 

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Breya Nathan
<p>i hope you love it...</p>

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