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shining sun


The sun is shining down on my skin

The skin are warm getting hot

And my head full of hair becoming shiny and warm

The sun touching my face

My Brown Eyes becoming like a pool of honey

My skin slowly turning red

A cold glass of water next to me melting

The sun shining down on me

It's getting hard for me to see

But I do enjoy the warm sun shining down on me 

 
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atx.kiara

Hello, my name is Kiara, im 15 years old and just want to share my poems and gain tips from anyone :) Please leave comments and feedback on my poems <3

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