Shooting Star

June 22, 2013

We wish upon a shooting star, just to change who we are

Gaze among the stars so bright, just so we can see the light

Those in the heavens above, don’t know of the troubles below

How even when we see fresh fallen snow, we wish that our flaws would go

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