Silver Feline

Tue, 04/22/2014 - 11:08 -- atate97

The silver coated feline creeps up and takes the breath of a young girl. She can't see through the pain as the claw pierces her skin. Deeper and deeper. She cries. Noone hears her screams. Why, you ask? Because the screams. The screams are inside her head. And the cat? The cat is her blade.

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savigirl14

Good metaphor. A lot of strong emotions

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