sister
my sister is more than what she thinks she is
she's the rainy day that's just perfect for reading
the one wildflower that is just simply perfect in a field of others.
the wind that blows through the trees,
she's the ray of sun on my shoulder,
and the funny jokes that make me laugh.
my sister is many things,
a wuss she is most definitely not.
a girl,
or even better.
woman.
who stands by her beliefs and doesn't fall when you most expect it.
hot headed yes, but in the best ways.
a woman destined to go to the green side as a medic for the marines.
though she isn't there yet she carries her med kit around
just in case.
just in case someone would need help.
My sister never ceases to inspire me.
As her twin I know she is going somewhere.
wherever that may be I don't know but here is what I do know.
She's smart, the kind of smart that's funny yet so inspiring at the same time
She's funny, the kind of funny that makes you laugh and even after shes said a joke and its many hours later, it never ceases to make me laugh and shake my head.
Shes pretty, there are days I know she doesn't think it but I love the way she looks. I love her smile her hair that dimple on her cheek and everything that is her.
shes the one who comes up with crazy food and drink combos like, lemonade and root beer or simply eats an entire jar of banana peppers just because she likes them.
shes simply her.
a constant in my life I love and cherish.
shes her.
and without her what would I be?
for she is so constant in my life
she was the one to bandage my finger or call me out when I was being stupid.
she helps me with the facts I need to know
and never ceases to amaze me.
shes amazing.
and I hope she realizes it just as much as I do.
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Your Poem's Voice
PersonalThemeAbstract
Deeply personal, autobiographical tribute to twin sister with concrete details.
SparseMeasureDense
Moderate density; primarily one sustained idea (sister's worth) with layered examples.
DarkSentimentBright
Strongly positive; celebration, admiration, love throughout with affirming tone.
StillEnergyExplosive
Building intensity through repetition and accumulating praise; passionate but contemplative.
MicroLengthEpic
Approximately 45 lines; falls in 31-60 range.
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Rich metaphors (rainy day, wildflower, wind, sun ray) woven throughout.
LyricVoiceDramatic
Pure lyric internal voice; twin speaker's intimate emotional reflection on sister.
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