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THE SKY


One day on my way to school

I had a feeling this day wasn't gonna be cool

 

On my way to P.E. which was my next class

Just wanted this day to pass

 

Suddenly I heard a bang

And I said "oh dang"

 

That bang was loud

And I was not proud

 

Then they broke in and shot 

And i said "OMG"

 

There was a kid all gory

And I said "oh lordly"

 

Then the kid went to the sky 

And then I said goodbye

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Comments (8)

N.Mosqueda
<p>you did a great job-jessica</p>
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<p>THis is a very good poem i like how you rhymed-Blanca</p>
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<p>That was really good, and I loved the way you wrote your peom.-Geraldine</p>
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<p>jose cisneros good job and great work</p>
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<p>Marco Jimenez- i like you rhyming nick</p>
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<p>Josev- i like how your poem rhymes&nbsp;</p>
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<p>EmanuelRosas-I liked your poem and how hard you worked on it</p>
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<p>I like how you sectioned it out into little paragraphs. ~Natalie O.</p>

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