Sleepless nights

Sleepless nights 

aloneless nights

peaceless nights 

all end the same 

overthinking leads to bleeding 

depression ends with  no eating 

episodes seem to be the only time i can sleep 

but the sleepless nights 

i can see lights 

i can feel frights 

i can live life 

but the sleepless nights 

all end the same . 
                                 ~Jada

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Jadamarie06

This is my first real poem, when i was 15 i was in a poetry class for a year . I want to know you honest opinion . I need help improving my skills because I really love poetry.

 

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