Slow Down
“Slow down,” my mothers voice rang in my ears
I disregarded and tried to speed the merry go round to its limit
My hair floating through the air, free as the birds in the sky
Until it came to a stop
Upon my feet touching the ground, the world shook
Shook, until my face replaced my feet
My mother approached with a reaffirming grin and handed me some water
Trusting in her care I began to drink
Each subsequent sip proved more difficult
As I walked the blurry figures stared at me
Each step grew more cumbersome as the world shook
Shook, until my face replaced my feet
I peered at the horizon in hopes of a recognizable silhouette
But the only familiarity was a ringing
Echoing in my head, “Slow Down”
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