Smile

April 18, 2013

Smile for me, my love Till your last breath fades away Please watch over me

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MVP-Most Valuable PoetApr 18, 2013

nice start add more ideas to this poem.......or did you right this style on purpose? i'm a power poetry mentor check out my poems