Smoke-Free For Two Years
Something wonderful happened two years ago.
On January 1, 2024, I gave up all forms of tobacco.
I've been smoke-free two years today.
I decided to throw my cigarettes away.
I also haven't used chewing tobacco or snuff.
I decided to abandon tobacco, I'd had enough.
I've been smoke-free for two years and I'm glad.
Cigarettes cause lung cancer and that's very sad.
Two years ago today, I said goodbye to tobacco.
If somebody offers you a cigarette, please say No.
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Primarily personal/autobiographical achievement; minimal abstraction or philosophical inquiry.
Repetitive ideas across lines; low density of new concepts; meditative/declarative pacing.
Strongly positive; celebrates recovery, pride, and health decision with affirmation.
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