Smoking
You think you look cool
you think you all that
baby you look pathetic
and that, is a fact
heres what I see
to your disbelief
I see coughfing
I see choking
I see a build up of tar in your lungs
and now you can continuosly stop breathing
what do you think
does this sound fun
If it does then you are truly dumb
to me this looks painful
to me this looks sick
to me this looks
this looks
this looks like death from a stick
so, do you still want that bic?
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