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Smoking


You think you look cool

you think you all that

baby you look pathetic 

and that, is a fact

heres what I see

to your disbelief

I see coughfing 

I see choking

I see a build up of tar in your lungs 

and now you can continuosly stop breathing 

what do you think 

does this sound fun

If it does then you are truly dumb

to me this looks painful

to me this looks sick

to me this looks 

this looks

this looks like death from a stick

so, do you still want that bic?

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