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Smoldering


Every time I think you've grinded me to dust,You find a new way to break me even more.You started with my future, my dreams, my ambitions.Now they're naught but a pile of ash. Then you moved to my present.Made me feel small. Useless, even.Like a barely smoldering torch against a sea of shadows.But you never could break my mask. How is it that you cannot tear this painted-on smile?Is it because I refuse to give it up?Or are you merely saving it for another day? You've shattered me, every last bit.But I'll keep trying to glue myself back together.Not because of me, and not because of you. It's because for every torch snuffed,a thousand more take its place. These, you, are my demons to face.And so face them, I shall.
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“My breath is offensive to my wife, and I am loathsome to my own brothers” - Job 19:17 || Welcome to my page. I like to write about myself and the things I experience, sometimes metaphorically, sometimes not.

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal trauma and resilience, grounded in autobiographical pain

SparseMeasureDense

Dense emotional ideas: destruction, resistance, renewal packed throughout

DarkSentimentBright

Negative trauma balanced by defiant hope and determination

StillEnergyExplosive

Aggressive verbs, sharp breaks, intense emotional momentum throughout

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 28 lines; falls within 16-30 range

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Rich metaphors: dust, ash, torch, sea of shadows, gluing together

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric first-person internal voice addressing absent antagonist

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