So Alone

by Tfortune

August 30, 2013

I can't wake up, I think I’m still dreaming

Lost, alone, my mind still teeming

Screaming

Back to reality

I'm stuck between yesterday and today

When I cried and begged you to stay

To say

We are infinity

Why did you leave, did you think about me?

Without you I’m dark and empty

Lonely

I'll never understand

Is something evil dividing our hearts?

Bleak as a winter night, too dark

Apart

Solitary wasteland

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Comments (2)

zwalker5Aug 30, 2013

<p>Im accustomed to traditional poetry but I like yours execept its to the point! I prefer poems that make you think! but at the same time poetry that speaks directly to people simply is good too!Everyone has their own style! :) I Love poetry and people who embrace it! Very nice</p>

TfortuneAug 30, 2013

<p>Could you give me feedback on my poem?</p>

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