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Someone for the sun

by muizz (Mark)

CC BY-NC
Ok mabey Im needy To watch the sky change colour's and due its part routinely And admit it's easiness to say the same at vows To prove that negative and positive can live in harmony when it allows I'm in need of someone with a list of differences Thats willing to make it work To together challenge new experiences But who can accept mine my quirk And thus I meant to admire every sunset alone A heart which is a one roomed home I beat at my own door But life has beauty why wish for more
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muizz (Mark)

Im a seventeen year old who had a passion for writing since the 4th grade I thought it was going to take me somewhere seeing that I was the only boy who couldn't play sports who was born with a soft soft voice and remains misunderstood I have spent my childhood trying to escape every comer of it yet still I have gotten nowhere I still have big dream like making children's dream come true and going to America

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal reflection on loneliness and needs with some philosophical questioning

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple ideas per stanza: neediness, acceptance, self-admiration, solitude, balance

DarkSentimentBright

Melancholic acceptance; negative framing softened by recognition of beauty

StillEnergyExplosive

Conversational, introspective pace with moments of emotional intensity

MicroLengthEpic

Fourteen lines; falls in 7-15 line range

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Heart as one-roomed home, sunset admiration, metaphoric language balanced with declaration

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric voice; internal monologue without dramatic or narrative persona shift

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