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Sorrow and Pain


When God created heaven and earth

that was celebratory

the victory is called Jubilees

in the process of His creation, He created man (to lead)

who needed a helpmate (the woman)

man falls into a deep sleep

out comes the woman from man's rib

the origin of the woman

came out the ribs of man

man was named Adam

for he had a specific duty

take care of the land of Eden (this is why man was to lead 1st)

then came the woman to enter Eden and help Adam

God warned both to eat any fruit, BUT the fruit of knowledge of good and evil

the serpent deceives the woman

for she fell for what she heard

for the man fell for listening to the woman and not God

Humanity downfall spiraled like a whirlwind

disobedience of man and woman has lead to sorrow and pain

God told the woman

your generation will multiply with sorrow and pain

when we came out of our mother's womb

don't matter what day

don't matter what time

don't matter what year

don't matter what hospital

we all became sinners

filled with sorrrow and pain, not even knowing why

until the Lord reveals the revelation of generational curses

thank God He spared Adam and Eve's lives

for you and I would never come into existence.

what do we know now

As the Lord states

I am the way, truth, and life

learn from your father and mother's disobedience

so you don't become what you despise

thank you Jesus for sparing the lives of Adam and Eve 

so people like me can read Your truth 

live a life that glories You

and lead precious souls to You as the Messiah

who sits in a throne much higher

we live in a sinful world

that dates back to downfall of humanity

but fear not for I am with you say The Lord

for I gave you the spirit of love, power and a sound mind

that inspires and gives hope to humantiy now an onward

that is already filled with sorrow and pain.

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Mix of abstract theological concepts with personal spiritual testimony and reflection.

SparseMeasureDense

Extremely dense; multiple theological ideas, narrative arcs, and moral lessons per lines.

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Acknowledges sorrow and pain but emphasizes divine salvation, hope, and redemption.

StillEnergyExplosive

Intense declarative voice; urgent spiritual instruction and passionate theological conviction throughout.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 60+ lines; substantial length with extended narrative and thematic development.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Limited metaphor and simile; mostly declarative and expository rather than ornamental language.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Primarily lyric spiritual voice shifting toward dramatic didactic instruction and biblical narrative.

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