Sorrow and Pain
When God created heaven and earth
that was celebratory
the victory is called Jubilees
in the process of His creation, He created man (to lead)
who needed a helpmate (the woman)
man falls into a deep sleep
out comes the woman from man's rib
the origin of the woman
came out the ribs of man
man was named Adam
for he had a specific duty
take care of the land of Eden (this is why man was to lead 1st)
then came the woman to enter Eden and help Adam
God warned both to eat any fruit, BUT the fruit of knowledge of good and evil
the serpent deceives the woman
for she fell for what she heard
for the man fell for listening to the woman and not God
Humanity downfall spiraled like a whirlwind
disobedience of man and woman has lead to sorrow and pain
God told the woman
your generation will multiply with sorrow and pain
when we came out of our mother's womb
don't matter what day
don't matter what time
don't matter what year
don't matter what hospital
we all became sinners
filled with sorrrow and pain, not even knowing why
until the Lord reveals the revelation of generational curses
thank God He spared Adam and Eve's lives
for you and I would never come into existence.
what do we know now
As the Lord states
I am the way, truth, and life
learn from your father and mother's disobedience
so you don't become what you despise
thank you Jesus for sparing the lives of Adam and Eve
so people like me can read Your truth
live a life that glories You
and lead precious souls to You as the Messiah
who sits in a throne much higher
we live in a sinful world
that dates back to downfall of humanity
but fear not for I am with you say The Lord
for I gave you the spirit of love, power and a sound mind
that inspires and gives hope to humantiy now an onward
that is already filled with sorrow and pain.
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Mix of abstract theological concepts with personal spiritual testimony and reflection.
Extremely dense; multiple theological ideas, narrative arcs, and moral lessons per lines.
Acknowledges sorrow and pain but emphasizes divine salvation, hope, and redemption.
Intense declarative voice; urgent spiritual instruction and passionate theological conviction throughout.
Approximately 60+ lines; substantial length with extended narrative and thematic development.
Limited metaphor and simile; mostly declarative and expository rather than ornamental language.
Primarily lyric spiritual voice shifting toward dramatic didactic instruction and biblical narrative.
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