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Soul in a Coma


My soul's in a coma;

and no body knows.

i act like i'm fine.

but i'm broke to the bone.

this meat sac is hollow.

can you see past my eyes?

my body'll follow.

from this life, i resign.

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Comments (3)

TamingOfSeaWolves
<p>thank you very much! it means a lot&nbsp;to hear from others!</p>
ErikaHope
<p>This was short but so great !&nbsp;</p>
TamingOfSeaWolves
<p>please comment</p>

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