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Soul Mates


Soul mates are hard to find Only when, it’s a matter of time The day will come that you’ll be mine I think about your face and know you’re fine If only you knew this day has arrived I want to bring laughter and joy to your life All our sadness pushed to the side Listening to your voice and the words you project While I’m in your arms, feeling no threat Security you’ll provide, I have no questions, bet Moments of pure love, I’ve laid down to rest While your hands are wandering off, guess I’m your number one fan, no one can compare I’ll ride n die for you always, I’m the one who cares Everyone may have come and go in your life, but I’m not scared I’m the woman you need, not another, I couldn’t bare The day God brings us together; there’s no running no where Finally to have each other, will bring nothing but happiness Seeing you by side, can’t believe this happening Waking up to each other and saying I love you This I will do and I know I’m not a fool The feelings are too real and it was easy to choose As each day passes you are who I want to be with My life is changing in this air I breathe in Your spirit your soul is all I’m needed The emotions expressed, I’m finally blessed I sleep at night pretending to be on your chest You holding me tight telling me to rest As we say good night, together we say YES!
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Reinanena
I appreciate your feedback, I really sat back and thought what I really wanted to say and it hit me..and this is the final piece..Thanks again for your constructive criticism, very much appreciated
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
great job in polishing this poem recite it and ask yourself how does this poem sound to you this poem gives a better flow to your msg
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
beautiful poem-this is very heartfelt i felt the message, it came from the heart very inspiring and meaningful "Taking that chance with you will not make me square"-tweak this particular line (didn't like the word square for this line) here's a thought taking that chance with you ignites the love we will share or something similar that ends with word share

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