SOUNDS LIKE TO ME
Looks to me
What ya need is to
stimulate the senses.
Well, that’s where I come in,
Straight up out of the trenches.
And if You thirsty?
yo mommy I got what Quenches.
I can tare down those walls
with all your guarded fences.
Except for the necessary defenses
I'll bring ya peace
to all your broken pieces
Smooth out all the wrinkles n creases
Till everything is pretentious
And If you can believe in this
& willing to take chances,
Then I could Set your mind at ease
No double back glances.
While this world around you crashes
Because is clashes with what was set by these egotistical simple minded fascists who are quick to pass judgment but they never really had this.
You need that twin flame?
Yo Mommy i am this
Just Take a moment and picture this.
I'm like the sandpaper & you're the matches. We can take this spark let passion heat thins up and then we can brand this
Ya Gotta have faith girl
in what this Rant is.
It's like going out on a limb
With a tree with no branches.
Let me take that hand
you been steadily clenchin
So I can show you what romance is.
No longer sitting on the sidelines warming up benches
Gonna lay you down with all your defenses
Heart in hand Covered in
the blemishes
Made from all-the monkey wrenches
life threw in oh did I mention?
U can count on me
like you was doing a census.
Cuz Loyalty these days is gone like it was doing a prison sentence.
All except for that one in my reflection youd never have to thrive for this.
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