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SOUNDS LIKE TO ME


Looks to me What ya need is to      stimulate the senses.  Well, that’s where I come in,     Straight up out of the trenches. And if You thirsty?    yo mommy I got what Quenches. I can tare down those walls    with all your guarded fences.  Except for the necessary defenses I'll bring ya peace   to all your broken pieces Smooth out all the wrinkles n creases Till everything is pretentious And If you can believe in this    & willing to take chances, Then I could Set your mind at ease     No double back glances.   While this world around you crashes Because is clashes with what was set by these egotistical simple minded fascists who are quick to pass judgment but they never really had this. You need that twin flame? Yo Mommy i am this Just Take a moment and picture this. I'm like the sandpaper & you're the matches. We can take this spark let passion heat thins up and then we can brand this Ya Gotta have faith girl in what this Rant is. It's like going out on a limb With a tree with no branches. Let me take that hand    you been steadily clenchin So I can show you what romance is. No longer sitting on the sidelines warming up benches Gonna lay you down with all your defenses Heart in hand Covered in the blemishes Made from all-the  monkey wrenches life threw in oh did I mention? U can count on me like you was doing a census. Cuz Loyalty these days is gone like it was doing a prison sentence. All except for that one in my reflection youd never have to thrive for this.
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My Name Is Joe Lilley w/ The Alias Levi DiVine. I'm A Musician, Poet and Lyricist,

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Personal romantic/relationship pitch with some abstract ideals

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