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Spelling it out


Guns guide your hands and feet

Your ignorance you breathe into the frozen air

The colors are all the same to me

But to you, it is war

 

Sheltered behind your branches

Where no one can see beyond the glistening thorns

I can sense their need to hear you scream

But you are already gone

 

Dancing in a storm of blood

You plead for retribution and their forgiveness

Choose your next move wisely, soldier boy

The die is cast again

 

The sun will not shine for us

I am just a woman fighting in a man’s war

I could tally the kills for your guilt

If only you had some

 

You did this because of tea

That chess game you didn’t win for the king and queen

I could knock some sense into the storm

If I could spell it out

 

Crying in a storm of blood

They plead for retribution and your forgiveness

But you’re too far gone, soldier boy

The die is tossed away

 

Your revenge is so fickle

Maybe they could give you a lesson on parties

If we lived across the ocean blue

Perhaps we will never

 

While they read your letters

I’m sketching out my own secret rebellion

We cower in your sheets and hearts

Perhaps this is our chance

 

Hiding in a storm of blood

You failed to accept a country rising there

You’ll definitely miss the one here

A girl now holds the die

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The Darcy Perspective

No one said that you are going to go through life unscathed. You will be hurt. You are going to hate people and people are going to hate you. You will even hate yourself. But those are not good enough reasons to give up. Someone out there loves you and cares about you and it will never be enough for you to love them back. You can’t just be done because your expectations weren’t met. You don’t deserve what you have, and until you understand that, you will never be happy with what you get.

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The Darcy Perspective
<p>This poem was for a project at school, for the book <em>Rise to Rebellion</em> by Jeff Shaara. I highly recommend it.</p>

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