Spring Haiku by Aaron

April 6, 2016

Spring is beautiful

With it’s shimmering flowers

Because of nature

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mrs earlApr 21, 2016

<p>The choice osf 'shimmering'  is very atmospheric. The last line, although it fits the syllable count, doesn't really fit the poem.</p>