Stakes
I hate competition.
It just isn't in me.
How we rank and file
Away imperfections
That make humanity beautiful,
Turning laughter into derision
Where the only humor left
Is the blood on the floor.
The sweat and tears
To score in a game
Where the points don't matter.
And they never do.
That's why it's a game.
I don't get it.
I hate competition.
I hate being belittled
When the other team wins.
It's just a game.
Why am I made less?
It's just a game.
And when it hurts when you do?
"It's just a game."
Then why do you use it
To exorcise my humanity
Instead of exercising your own?
What is the point?
What is your score to settle?
I don't get it.
I hate competition.
I hate "us versus them";
The use of them-ing,
The out and out outing,
The othering, smothering
Fires within;
Starting fires without
Purpose beyond a target
To turn a bonfire,
A celebration,
Into arson;
To roast marshmallows
And friends made faux.
I don't get it.
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PersonalThemeAbstract
Personal frustration with competition, evolving toward abstract critique of systemic othering.
SparseMeasureDense
Multiple dense ideas per stanza: competition, ranking, dehumanization, othering, systemic harm.
DarkSentimentBright
Deeply negative throughout: hatred, belittlement, humanity stripped, arson metaphor, profound disagreement.
StillEnergyExplosive
Intense rhetorical questions, vivid violent imagery (blood, arson), building rage and urgency.
MicroLengthEpic
45 lines across three stanzas; falls within 31-60 range.
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Rich metaphors (blood on floor, arson, roasting friends), personification, extended imagery throughout.
LyricVoiceDramatic
Pure lyric internal voice; introspective first-person confession with no dramatic personas.
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