Star Brights
I float within liquid blackness under pink star brights
Motionless… numb… under the surface of scattered pink petals,
looking up at the star brights of the cosmos.
The lake mirrors the star brights. I am amongst the star brights.
Motionless… numb… under the surface of scattered pink petals
I see pine trees of the forest stretch towards the starry night sky
as the calm lake mirrors me amongst star brights
while I float… motionless in its silent water.
I see pine trees of the forest stretch toward the night sky
As I look up at pink star brights of the cosmos
Floating… motionless in silent water,
I float within liquid blackness under pink star brights.
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