To Start, To Stop

I know the starting and stopping drill

Oh, I know it all too well 

One day you're driven 

The next you're in a spell

 

Oh, could it be no destiny 

Or maybe no real zeal 

Could talking remove you're eye on the prize 

It seems to me there is no denying 

 

I know the starting and stopping drill

Oh, I know it all too well 

To Start, To Stop 

Who cares the lot

It will never end well

Comments

Mafi Grey

I kinda know this too well, It's never good to start and stop cause it will never get finished. I do these with my poems, I work on them and the next I'm doing something us and months go by; only now for me to finish it. 

Mafi Grey

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