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Hold me close

Don't let me go

I'm falling for you but I doubt you know 

Tell me I'm not crazy to give you so much and expect so little.

What are we doing?

Is this love or is it lust?

With your lips pressed against my neck I could swear you just wanna feel loved.

I thinking I'm giving up.

I'm falling in love.

Catch me, please.

Stay to hear my heart beat.

Watch my eyes and never lose my gaze. 

Don't let me go.

Hold me close,please, don't  walk away this time.

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I'm just a girl trying to find my place in this world. I've had to grow up all to fast, but am really still just a kid. I love the outdoors, because there are no walls. I don't follow the status quo and probably never will. You can correct my writing and tell me everything that's wrong with it, but I won't change it. I write what I feel and sometimes it can turn out to be a really great poem and sometime's it's just okay. Honestly, that's fine with me. I don't strive for perfection because I am human, so all I am here to do is write poetry. It may be bad poetry and it may be great poetry, but I refuse to claim either one. I write poetry simply because I enjoy doing so.

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Joelsoul22
<p>very tricky poem. the rhyme scheme at the beginning was a nice start and then it just choppy after that. the content was great, but your delivery needs a little bit of work. The ending was a little abrupt, but i liked it.</p>

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