Stay Away

Everyone tells me to get over you,

And I really wish I could,

But theres just something about you,

Sommething I never understood.

You still me me smile,

I laugh at everything you say,

But I cant get you outta my head,

And I truly can't stay away.

Comments

jwiener

This poem is so honest, and what it really comes down to is that we have to listen to what our hearts tell us as opposed to listening just to what our friends tell us to do. I liked how the last line of the poem linked back to the title, because it makes the poem have a fulfilled, circular feeling.

sarahhein93

And this is still true, but the person who this is about doesn't feel the same way.

jwiener

I'm sure if it is meant to be, it will. Keep writing down your emotions in your poetry!

sarahhein93

Thank you

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