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STAY UNTIL WE DIE


the stars

in our hearts

are our dreams from the dark

the real

that i feel

is something new...... to my heart

will u stay until you u die

i  don't wanna say goodbye

just hold on to me for tonight

dont u wanna be with me ...tonight

promise we wont fuss

we wont fight

just let me have you in my sight

 that sweet smile

those big brown eyes

lets view the stars in the moonlit sky

you'd make a promise

i shut my eyes

we"d be with eachother

until the sun shines

in the new sky that no human has seen

id smile while crying in your arms

because in the passion

of your words

i felt a confusion

between comfort

and discomfort

yet i fell

into a dream

where your promise was broken

i awoke to an numbness

of your embrace

my body colder

than ice

while wrapped in your arms

i turned to see

u stare at me 

but your eyes set closed

your lips so warm were flat cold

and your melo light brown skin was pale and ice cold

my voice fell silent 

and i closed my eyes

awaken in reality to my surprise that

you and i were both

outta body

standing in a warmth

glaring at the sun

u promised

reciting our words in my mind

we stayed together until we die.

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