still got it!

Location

10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

how is it i'm 35 and alive?
my style is still fly like an eagle
i see these young boys style sink like a battleship
my game of basketball is crisp like kellogs frosted flakes
while these young boys game of ball is slippin like the dmx record
my taste of hip hop back then is classic like graffiti writings on a train
these young boys taste of music is not fantastic like the original four
my way of talking to women is clean like my place
while these young boys way of talking to girls is sloppy like an old man trying to race
still got it, haven't lost it
u youngsters haven't got it and have lost it like Jeffrey Dahmer
u boys need to learn
that's how respect is earn

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Comments

ambercurry37

I like the metaphors. They are very creative. I like the way it flows, like a rap song.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you for the comment
i like to be creatively original
thanks 4 the support
check out my other poems

SoulfulJay84

This poem is great!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you

means alot

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