A Street Without Exit
Our love has gone as a skylight,a dark hole where all our color was extinguished quickly and it was impossible for me.
In this dark space between you and me the star has been dimmed and it was common for me after all I walked to the absurd distance and the place where did it ever cross your presence, and I realize that my soul its like a street without exit where I can not escape it, where there is no space for me and all that I did,I did it for doing something much better for you because for you I would cross that street ,but I had enclosed in these four walls from you dark love,where you do not you let it out of my freedom.
Because of your fault where I blocked it completely to not realize that out there would be someone for me that would make me a shining castle for me and not these four walls of stupid pride for me,now I see that I clung to you and never saw the light of my sun because of your stupid street without exit.
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Jonatanvega
Hello my name is Jonatan Vega as you all see I love poetry.My favorite languages are Spanish,French,English and some Italian,but my first language is Spanish.I live in US but I am from México.I am a college student at American River college in Sacramento,CA.I consider myself as very talented.I am very confident.I am kinda quiet,but when you get to know me I am amazing.I consider defining what the soul feels is art:poetry.I am a painful poet most of the time,but I could write about everything when I put that objective in my mind.I love love for what it is.i am a amazing person if you get to talk to me Some of My work focuses on what I see as the repression of women by men. This often takes the form of personal insults directed at men in general Love,Heartbreak.life changed my writing by helping me to lose my former models, and reach a more dramatic lyricism, my style now showed more realism than before.Recurring themes in my work include love,hearbreak,humanism, nature, alienation,loss, love, pain, growth, hope,death, family, sorrow, women’s issues, and violence.Although my portrayal of men is ironic and critical,I felt a strong need for love, and Im able to express the tension and passion these ambivalent feelings in poetry both simple and deeply sensual, expressing an original note in erotic poetry in a sensitive manner. . Facebook: @Jonatan Vegâ poeta instagram: @Jonatanvega_writesbooks Twitter:@Fearlessvega Any thing you want to know feel free to ask
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