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Stuck in the rain


Soft sweet sound of the rain Echos in my heart full of pain The cold sharp wind slashes at my face Dealing multple blows at a fast pace. Trees sway violently as if they are trying to attack. Looking more and more viscious in the pitch black. Walking with the purpose of escaping my head Now troubled at the fact i may end up dead. Animals taking shelter near by Avoiding the fury of the sky. Troubled thoughts wonder how it feels to die To hurt no more and be able to fly. Quickly dismissed by the thunders rage Maybe my mind is hell... my permanent mental cage. Trapped in downward feelings Just trying to feel things My joy is gone like the sun Blocked by darkness the most violent one. Every smile melts away at the moment of loneliness There has to be more to life and not just only this. Crying on my knees admist the rain I cry to the father to remove my pain. Lightning strikes loud as if to say On your feet child and be on your way. Keep fighting now soldier and soon you'll see Everything has a purpose so trust in me.
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