Stuffed Crust
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read it once
it's pepperoni
read it again
it's cheese
but bite in
and it's both
poems are complex
they aren't what they seem
but they're delicious
like a stuffed crust pizza
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I enjoyed your poem. Nothing is wrong with profound and deep poetry because I write it all the time.
However, I like the simplicity of this poem. I wonder if you could think
of more metaphors that relate poetry to food. I bet you could write a really funny
poem this way. You should try it. At some point in a poets life, a poet will
write a poem about poetry itself. It always happens! I think that's similar
to what you did in this poem but, you happen to relate it to pizza.
Thanks to your poem, I am now craving stuff crust pizza, just like I crave
onamatopoeias ;) gulp, mhhm,
yummm lol
Happy Writing!
Cynthia
Power Poetry Mentor