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Sublime


Sublime, 

As he stood againt the tattered tree.

Gazing out across the lush land,

Overgrown from a week of hot summers rain.

She could not help but stare.

There was something about the way he looked out into the world.

The want to know, 

To really know whats out there,

Beyond. 

His eyes fell down to her.

Those hazel, golden eyes looked into every deep pocked of her soul.

He looked at her like he looked at the world.

She looked away,

Embarassed and red.

Looked up at him once more.

He was Sublime.

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Comments (2)

gmeverest
<p>Thank you so much, please share it with your friends!!:)</p>
Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda
<p>Powerfully expressed! Truly powerful! Keep sharing keep sharing! The world needs your expression! Keep sharing your life your mind your heart!</p>

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