Sudden Death

Girl you better speak up, at least say something,
You’re unresponsive, like you got nothing,
But when they catch scent, of your lack,
Of confidence, they will attack; surround you like a wolf pack,

Sudden death, no one ever heard from you again,
I know how, you feel,
Second guess, if you even have any friends,
Sudden death, you don’t wanna make that kinda name for yourself around here,
Sudden death, is on the outside, looking in…

Try to be that kinda person everyone wants to be around, cause you’re a riot,
But you’re home alone on your only Friday off, and everybody else is out,
Sudden death, you’re the quiet one, awkward silence,
And you’re sick of it sick of you’re stupid self,

You’re a shadow, followed, by a man in black,
Cause once you go down this way you ain’t ever coming back,
And on your tombstone, they engraved, “cause of death, unknown…”
No ,no, no,

You’re a shadow, followed by a man in black,
Cause once you go down, this way, you ain’t ever coming back…

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