Summer Trip
In the country summer
With no reservations of the mind
No opposition to the new
All gems and melodic trauma bereft of me
A few drops of divination to pass my lips
And conceive my warped notions
And I couldn't ever recount the night's revelations had in the
Length of the lifetime that had unfolded
While the sun was asleep
All I remember
A vintage black velvet glove on my left hand, a matching black scrunchy
Divine tones of golden rod, sweet honey; violent, vibrant reds bleeding, exhausting and dazzling me
Throughout splashes of laguna
Faded, warm-hued denim, wet and heavy
After I jumped in the pool
Pearly drops of dawn's dew, earth breathing clouds of steam intertwined throughout thickets of fog in a prehistoric sky
Slate beige, warm gray concrete and even lilacs, discrete lavender accents
An ocean of discovery and yet still more
Unpredicted exposition in youth
Infantile inquisition crashed, ricocheted off of a canvas of nerves
Tracheal resonance
Halt, satiate, release
As invisible hands swept the length of my arms and legs in synchronicity
And souls shot through my legs and feet
Forceful, opportunistic
Leaving me with only questions and
Sensory
And now I feel I've always been here.
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PersonalThemeAbstract
Personal sensory memory grounded in concrete summer moment, some abstract existential reflection.
SparseMeasureDense
Dense layering of sensory images, philosophical musings, and fragmented revelations throughout.
DarkSentimentBright
Predominantly positive wonder and discovery, tempered by trauma and exhaustion references.
StillEnergyExplosive
Kinetic intensity through violent colors, crashing inquisition, sweeping hands, forceful language.
MicroLengthEpic
31-60 lines; approximately 35 lines across multiple stanzas.
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Rich metaphors, similes, personification, vivid sensory imagery throughout; highly ornamented.
LyricVoiceDramatic
Pure lyric internal voice; introspective memory and sensation without dramatic persona.
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