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The Sun


the sun is an expression of growth. it helps the world go round. it allows the people to have a good or bad day. its funny how one thing can determine the future past or present. how does it determine the future past and present? lets start with THE FUTURE-..it is the very thing that starts the day. it determines which direction yur day will go in.if its sunny most likely yur day will be good. if its cloudy most likely yur gonna have a solemn day and if its rainey most likely yu will have a bad day. yur future has been determined. THE PAST- the sun cud have never granted yu his gift. he cud have just stayed in his peaceful state of pure darkness. yu need a past to have a future. which was the reasoning for my specific order of how i wrote this. the past determines the future and the history repeats itself so if it wasnt for the sun the future wud have not yet to come so history cudnt reapeat itself therefore not allwing the past be the past it wud be the present. which brings us to THE PRESENT- the sun allows life. it gives yu the oppurtunity to live life at that moment. live life to the fullest simply becuz yu know there will never ever be a day like this again. the sun allows time.it tells yu wen yur wonderful day has started and wen its time to end. allowing for the future to come so the past can repeat itself. so somehow the sun is both the past present and future all at the same time. the future is determined by the past and the past is determined by the present. becuz wat yu du in yur present state is the one thing that will go to the past as soon as the sun sets,which is wen the future begans, while allowing the past to repeat history. it all ties together. the sun is life itself.
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