The Sun and the Moon

Mon, 08/05/2013 - 19:51 -- n0xal

Good evening Moon,

How nice it is to see your face again.

The Sun, however, has fractured

and is silently

             falling

                    to

                        pieces

as everyone basks in your

     light.

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